Flash Fiction
$25 Prize
by Phylis Campbell Dryden
The Closet Artist didn't like to stay in one place any too
long. He lived out of his car, a beat-up '95 Ford Taurus. Washed
up at filling stations. Once in a while took a shower at one of
them truck stops. Even shampooed his hair a time or two.

One time he decided to mosey on down to the Big Apple.
Bought himself a twelve-pack of fake ID's, then rotated them like
dirty socks.

Every now and then he forgot who the heck he was supposed to
be, but that was okay. He would smirk and say, "Jes' call me

An itinerant house painter by trade, the Closet Artist picked up
odd jobs all over the place. Had a bunch of posters to tack up
on laundromat bulletin boards: "Painter . . . Want a room done
quick? . . . Quality work. Good prices." He gave out his cell
phone number and hoped for the best. One foghorn afternoon,
out of work and sick of playing cell phone Solitaire, he went to a
shiny aluminum diner on the bay and plunked himself down on a
torn red vinyl stool. Halfway into his third slurp of java, he
realized he was downwind of a smelly diner slut.

To keep his mind off the smell, which outdid his own fetid aroma
on the worst day of his life, he took out a felt-tip pen and
doodled on a brown paper napkin. Soon a picture of a log cabin
and some fir trees took shape. For good measure he made a
wispy line rise from the cabin’s chimney, and dotted in a star or

The diner slut eyeballed his sketch. "You must be an artist!"

"Nah, I ain't no artist." He shifted his body a few degrees south
of her, crumpled up the sketch and jammed it into his half-empty

“Then you must be a
closet artist.”

"That I am. I paints closets for a living . . . closets, bedrooms,
chicken coops, whatever."

“So you’re a house painter.”

"Houses, no." He signaled for a fresh cup of java—one for him
and another for the diner slut. "Ain't got the attention span to
paint a house. I gits sick of it. Before the paint's dry and the
trim's all done, I gits to thinking, 'Why don't these folks paint their
house psychedelic purple or maybe even fluorescent green like
the vests them highway workers wear?' Gits a hankering to be
moving on. Guess you could call it boredom—bored and dumb."

"I wish you'd paint my bedroom. I got enough money to pay you."

"Take a bath first and maybe I will."

The diner slut frowned dirty creases into her forehead. "Can't do
that. My boyfriend smashed up my porcelain tub with a sledge
hammer. He was high on bath salts. Can you beat that? Then
he did the awful-est thing. Went into the bedroom and blew his
brains out with a shotgun. Stuck the barrel in his mouth and
pulled the trigger with his big toe. Weren't nothing left of his
head but his lower jaw. Sprayed blood and brains all over my
bedroom wall, that's what. I tried to clean it up with bleach and
all, but it just ain't the same."

The Closet Artist pitied her. "I'll paint your bedroom for you, and
I'll even do it for free. If you buys the paint, the rollers, and stuff,
I'll do the rest. I'll even find you a fiberglass bathtub and put it in
for you. I'm handy like that."

The diner slut agreed to his offer. But he had one condition:
"You can't peek at my work. I hates to have people watch me
paint. You'll have to sleep somewheres else till I'm done."

She gladly decided to camp out on the davenport in her living
room while he worked behind closed doors. Having picked out a
pale shade of eggshell white, not the bright yellow Gusto he had
urged her to get, she settled for dull.

"It's your bedroom, so you can have what you wants," he said,
and was soon at work. It took him only a day or two to finish.
After cleaning up his brushes, dumping the rollers, and drying
off the paint pan, the Closet Artist told her she could go in and
take a look.

While she was oohing and ahhing, he slipped outside, revved
up his Ford and took off. It wasn’t till evening that she stopped
blubbering about his disappearance and opened the door to her
bedroom closet, where she found a single panel splashed with
vivid acrylics—jagged red and orange blossoms, periwinkle
blue, zesty yellow, and spears of the brightest green.

The Closet Artist had left his mark.

Phylis Campbell Dryden taught writing and literature courses for many
years as an English professor at Lebanon Valley College. Since retiring
from LVC in 2003, she has spent the past 13 years writing, taking
photographs and creating various types of artwork. She especially loves
writing flash fiction. Recently, her flash fiction piece, "Morosa," was listed
as a notable story by Gemini Magazine. Many of her essays have been
published in a local newspaper. In 2015, she earned an Honorable
Mention from the Keystone Press Association for three guest opinion
essays published through The Lebanon Daily News.